Chortos-2
Thanks!
03:11: an? 07:17: only Mirai was dressed up, surely? 13:12: invite?
serenae (uploader)
Thanks, will fix those! The “a” at 3:11 was intentional though, makes it sound more like a funny thing a kid would say
Migon
Thank you!
Oh, consider also changing “we” → “I” at 07:27, seeing as Mirai met them just a few days ago.
Fun line at 08:00 btw (although perhaps could be even better with a /k/ sound: how’s “complex cases”?)
Good point! Liko doesn’t necessarily know that, but yeah makes more sense. I like “complex cases” too, more alliterative!
rusty_mst
ty!
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Chortos-2
Thanks!
03:11: an?
07:17: only Mirai was dressed up, surely?
13:12: invite?
serenae (uploader)
Thanks, will fix those! The “a” at 3:11 was intentional though, makes it sound more like a funny thing a kid would say
Migon
Thank you!
Chortos-2
Oh, consider also changing “we” → “I” at 07:27, seeing as Mirai met them just a few days ago.
Fun line at 08:00 btw (although perhaps could be even better with a /k/ sound: how’s “complex cases”?)
serenae (uploader)
Good point! Liko doesn’t necessarily know that, but yeah makes more sense. I like “complex cases” too, more alliterative!
rusty_mst
ty!